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Yellow flower gloom's
vibrantly in the sun shine
wanting to be picked
I need to add more light and dark colours to my drawing because you can't see my drawing. It turned out how it was so pose to because it was detailed kind of.
Hi Rakai.I like the daffodill you did I also like that you talked about what you did to make it but I think you could talk about what it looks like and you could cheek your spelling too but everything else is good.
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Hi Rakai.I like the daffodill you did I also like that you talked about what you did to make it but I think you could talk about what it looks like and you could cheek your spelling too but everything else is good.
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