T2 W8 Matariki

We learnt that there are nine stars of matariki in the sky. I like that I have added the fish to my matariki star. I could maybe add some more detail to my star.

T2 W6 Persimmon writing

                     Persimmons

The juicy persimmon seed looks like a pumpkin seed. The orange persimmon with two

different shades of orange smell, fills my nose with happy delight. Slurp,

goes the persimmon down my mouth. It taste juicy and unbelievable in my

mouth. Only the hard seed was left in my hand so I took a bite of it

and it is gone just some of it crushed in my hand.

After my first bite of it was my worst of all, it felt slimy and gross to touch. Anxiously I took another bite

of the juicy fruit and crunch crunch crunch the skin was gone. “How much is left?” I said to myself. The Spectacular fruit was nearly gone in one bite so I

took another bite and it was gone straight down my throat. Mm mm mm that was nice.