Persimmons
The juicy persimmon seed looks like a pumpkin seed. The orange persimmon with two
different shades of orange smell, fills my nose with happy delight. Slurp,
goes the persimmon down my mouth. It taste juicy and unbelievable in my
mouth. Only the hard seed was left in my hand so I took a bite of it
and it is gone just some of it crushed in my hand.
After my first bite of it was my worst of all, it felt slimy and gross to touch. Anxiously I took another bite
of the juicy fruit and crunch crunch crunch the skin was gone. “How much is left?” I said to myself. The Spectacular fruit was nearly gone in one bite so I
took another bite and it was gone straight down my throat. Mm mm mm that was nice.
nice story rakai.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Paige.
ReplyDeleteI like how you drew a cool picture for your persimmon story and how you explained how your first time eating a persimmon because I personally
don’t like persimmons.