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Thursday, April 11, 2019

T1 W11 Watermelon writing

Delicious

“Mm mm” As I take a bite of the juicy fruit Crunch! My mouth starts watering and
I fill up with joy and happiness.
It felt like a watery sponge that is going to be squashed.
As I looked at it I was starting to have a feeling that I wanted more.
We were all quite for a minute I took two more bites and the whole
fruit was gone and I started to eat the
skin of the watermelon because I was hungry for more fruit.
It taste like sweet juicy water that has chunks of fruit in it. It was as tasty as
lollies that has just been brought from the shop.
As I take another bite the whole fruit was gone even the skin was gone.

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